At 450 words, my entry is a little bit longer than The Golden Eagle's suggested limit of 400, but I hope you'll forgive me. Also, please bear with me. Humour is not something I usually tackle!
Handsome hero crept
round the corner, punching First Anonymous Bad Guy in the face.
Second Anonymous Bad Guy was no problem either. Handsome Hero
back-kicked him without even turning round.
Handsome Hero made his
way to the pool area, not even caring that he still had his shoes on.
Rules were made to be broken. There she was, Plucky Heroine, bound to
a chair, gagged . She'd held her own so far through this long
adventure, but now it was time for him to rescue her from the
clutches of Evil Genius.
He ran over to her,
breaking another poolside rule, and began to work at the knots
holding her captive.
“Mmmph,” she
said.
“Sorry sweetheart?”
He was still concentrating on the task at hand.
“MMMPH,” she said
again, more urgently this time.
He looked up. There
stood Evil Genius, a gun in his hand.
“I knew you'd come.
This time Handsome Hero, it really is the end for you. I don't know
how you escaped the ski lift of death, the roller-coaster of doom, or
the runaway-driverless-subway-car of destruction, but no matter. You
won't get away this time.”
From the corner of his
eye Handsome Hero saw something move. Turning his head to look, he
realised that the pool wasn't empty. There were several sharks
swimming in it. Sharks? Really? Even as he'd stuffed the Shark
repellent in his pocket this morning he hadn't thought he would need
it. Sharks were so last decade. On the other hand, it would make this
all a lot easier. He would be forced into the pool, then whilst Evil
Genius was recounting every last step of his incredibly long and
detailed plan to take over the world to poor, helpless Plucky
Heroine, He, Handsome Hero, would despatch the sharks, silently climb
out of the pool behind his nemesis and knock him unconscious. He
sighed. It was a shame he had to get his hair wet.
“Stand on the edge
of the pool,” ordered Evil Genius.
“I suppose you
think you're going to make me jump in. No way that's
happening.” Handsome Hero was pleased that he'd finally got some
use out of the reverse psychology degree he'd taken all those years
ago.
Evil Genius grinned
an evil grin.
“Know why they call
me Evil Genius?” He asked.
“No, why?”
Evil Genius raised his
gun and shot Handsome Hero in the head. He watched as his enemy's
lifeless body toppled into the pool.
“Because I learn
from my mistakes.”
Plucky Heroine watched
as Evil Genius walked away. She wondered how hard it would be to
change her name to Evil Badass Sidechick.
LOL. That was hilarious! And I love that the Plucky Heroine wanted to turn into the Evil Badass Sidechick by the end. :)
ReplyDeleteNo worries about the word count; you more than made up for it.
Thanks for participating!
You're welcome, this was so much fun :-)
DeleteReally funny! I agree with TGE on the twist. :)
ReplyDeleteGotta love a woman with her eye on the main chance :-)
Deleteno, I think you do humor really well! Like the twist at the end.
ReplyDeleteThank you Alex, and congratulations on a brilliantly successful launch!
Deleteheh heh
ReplyDeleteThat is awesome. Bravo!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Randy
DeleteSeriously funny, especially the last line. You do a great job twisting the villain cliche. I loved this.
ReplyDeleteThanks Shell :-)
DeleteHA! This is freakin' awesome! Love it girl!
ReplyDeleteHeh, so glad you enjoyed it :-)
DeleteSki lift of death sounds like an amazing thriller. And finally, the evil genius earns his name!!
ReplyDeleteIt sounds like 70's airport blockbuster doesn't it?
DeleteLOL! Verrry fun. Thanks for sharing! :D
ReplyDeleteYou're very welcome. Glad you enjoyed it :-)
DeleteGo evil sidekick. Love those smart bad guys.
ReplyDeleteMaybe she'll help him take over the world after all :-)
DeleteThose are some great names of evil plans! Ski lift of death... hahaha! And I loved the ending!
ReplyDeleteThanks Krista, it was harder than I thought coming up with daft names!
DeleteLoved the names of the plans, and the plucky heroine's thoughts about becoming an evil sidechick. Very funny!
ReplyDeleteIt was definitely fun to write, a departure for me :-)
DeleteHahahahaha! so funny :D
ReplyDeleteGlad it made you smile :-)
DeleteLove it! Handsome Hero got cocky - he deserved it :)
ReplyDeleteI love having the power to kill the ones that should be killed :-)
DeleteWell done!
ReplyDeleteThank you :-)
DeleteThis was wonderful to read enjoy the blogfest.
ReplyDeleteYvonne.
Thanks Yvonne, glad you enjoyed it.
DeleteLoved Evil Genius's complicated death plans, and so glad he learned from his mistake. Handsome hero was a bit insufferable. ;)
ReplyDeleteWasn't he just? A lesson in how not to write your hero :-)
DeleteWell, for someone who said they don't usually tackle humor...You had me snorting and giggling out loud. Sharks...so last decade! And the ending was perfect! Snort.
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad you liked it Bish, I had so much fun with it :-)
DeleteOh my gosh, I so did not see that ending! Perfect! LOL!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Jennifer, it was fun to do :-)
DeletePriceless... LOL!
ReplyDeleteAre you certain that you don't normally tackle humour? Well, you should...
Your wonderful sense of humour shone through in this piece!
That was a lovely thing to say, thank you.
DeleteI laughed so hard, I spewed milk over my computer screen. I thought you said you don't normally write humor. This was hilarious. :D
ReplyDeleteI made you spew milk? Best compliment of the day ;-)
DeleteShark repellent worked for Batman. Sometimes we like to see the bad guy win. Change is good.
ReplyDeleteI'll confess, that might be where I 'borrowed' it from :-)
DeleteAH! I love it! Made me smile - killer last line!
ReplyDeleteWow, thanks Talli:-)
DeleteFantastic... fickle lady not even a shed tear for her Handsome. :)
ReplyDeleteOh no, she's far too ambitious for tears :-)
DeleteLoved the tongue-in-cheek writing.
ReplyDeleteThanks Susan :-)
DeleteFunny stuff. I like your name tags. Good luck in the blogfest!
ReplyDeleteThanks Cynthia, it was nice not to have to think of real names for a change :-)
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ReplyDeleteThat made me laugh out loud (and startle my poodle, who thinks it's time for me to settle down for the night!) What a great ending twist! Loved it :-) Thanks for sharing
ReplyDeleteYou're very welcome. I'm so glad you enjoyed it :-)
DeleteI'm so sorry Jen, somehow I missed your entry. I just read it now. Did you write it specifically, or is it part of a longer piece? I'd love to read more!
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